Gebear23, I see nothing wrong with your performance, It just sounded and looked great
On a side note, maybe you could slow it down, so it's easier to see, but thats just me being a pr*ck. It was really good, and the spectator seemed to enjoy it.
Extra props.
RamoD. - I see you tried somehting new, maybe a little artistic, but remember that when you do try somehitng a little omre on the artistic side, that you have to try to ignore the camera - ergo, not perform for the camera.
Tivo is an overused and overrated effect. But the nail was your Cardini, which needs more practise concerning the clean-up. But perhaps this is also becaue of the camera angle.
Anywho, you're outside, with a friend, a camera, cards. Beautifull day.
Why didn't you perform live? It would have made it so much better!
Gustav