Thanks for the input
Ok, thanks for the replies. Just to let you know, I'm not taking offense at what you're saying here. Maybe at the youtube comments, but here I'm getting good advice. I'm a magician by trade, not a XCMer, so this is a new realm for me.
webcam issue - I dont think there's any way that I could get a good cam before the deadline, so I'll have to live with that. I could maybe set up a backdrop or put in some video effects such as black and white. I'm pretty good with video editing, so I'll try that out. Also, I just got my Born to Perform T-Shirt, so the black will be better in the video.
Alvin - right click on the file names of the files and say "Save Target As"
D&D cuts - I like doing the multiple packet cuts, and I had probably the biggest problems with the putting packets away. When I make my new video, I'll have to not do the ending parts.
Erdanse change - I just got Hot Shot Color Changes starring Ben Salinas, and I'm learning alot about changes. I want to have a change in there, but I'll add a new, more visual change in there.
Voice Part - I wanted the video to sort of correspond with the artist discussion in Cerca Trova. I may remove it, but we'll have to see.
1:02 - Ok.
Length - I'm changing it to 1 song, so it will be better.
I've removed the first video from youtube, and I'm going to completely create a new video. I'll use the advice given here to make one. Thanks theory11!