Half-Vanish

[PaddyPanda]

Hello..
Just want your opinion about my take for half-vanish trick.
Here's the link :
http://www.youtube.com/user/revolusimagik#play/uploads/3/wWLBRfgFma4

Thanks,
PaddyPanda

 

[Quickshot]

I liked it, great performance. My only issue is that the camera angle flipped during it, giving me reason to believe that its not real-time. When i saw the deck in your left hand and then seemingly in your right, it threw me off, although i knew it was a mirrored image.

That might increase your "this is fake" comments when in realty its just good card magic.

EDIT: But of course that is just video editing issues, other than that i thought it was pretty good.

 

[Dmagic]

1. The actual half vanish is good, but next time, please don't copy DM's style, although he did not invent that style of video production, when your doing his trick, at least make the video production original, not just another clone.
2. you flashed when you palmed the cards.
3. The trick is meant to be done at a table, so use one.
4. As previously stated, the camera flipped a few times.
5. Please, don't use slow-mo or speed-ups, as they don't add anything, but rather decrease form the naturalness of your performance.
Just my thoughts,
Dmagic

 

[PaddyPanda]

Thanks for the advice. I'll try to make it more natural next time. Thanks alot dude. Peace =)

 

[Guardian452]

You put the cards in your right pocket, reached into your left, and pulled them out of your right again.

Stop with the camera switches, it's annoying and adds nothing.

Other than that, pretty good