Back Design

[limpbiz2789]

Hey guys,
This is my second back design I have created. I'm still going to add a few minors details but not too much that it'll over power the back itself. It will have white borders. Hopefully you guys like this. please comment.

Click the link then click on the picture itself to see it in better detail.

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/1363/roughdrafth.jpg

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9646/test4y.jpg

Thank You
-Sean

 

[Jase]

Its not bad.. but the straight lines dont go with the curved lines u have. Saying that.. i think this design has some potential. If u remove some of the straight lines and replace the remaining ones with curve ones it would look a lot better..

Also i have no idea what the 4 wavy looking round things are.... but removing them will help the design dramatically

Im not trying to be harsh.. thats just my personal opinion.

-Jase

 

[shankmagic]

that looks good. reminds me of a spider web. u can upload the image and actually make a deck here

http://www.bicyclepersonalizedcards.com/

its $20 though

u can order as many as you want.

 

[RickEverhart]

Not trying to hurt feelings.

I'm just going to be honest and say I don't like the design at all. All the straight lines look a bit odd and it looks like something a young child could throw together sitting a half hour at a computer.

Some people on here will say that love it and some will hate it. Either way...if you enjoy designing, then keep it up and eventually you'll get something that a majority like.

I also think that too many people on here will tell you that it is "Sweet man" just because they want to be nice, but are too afraid to say they aren't impressed.

 

[chriswiehl]

not very eye pleasing. it seems empty and like, idk blah, if the lines had some volume and they changed, that would be neat. but its just straight lines

 

[limpbiz2789]

Thank you for the replies so far. The design isn't complete yet. I will be working on a little bit each day and will post images of my progress. I just updated it now.

-Sean

 

[RickEverhart]

You are definitely headed in the right direction. I looked at the first and compared it to the updated version and it is starting to come together. It still looks a little "too busy" with lines. The curly things look a bit weird. That highlighting and shadowing effects are working well. Good job.

 

[Jase]

It looks like u just removed a few lines and then put effects on the remaining lines.... using photoshop effects in a back design isnt really a good idea, but thats my opinion.

 

[limpbiz2789]

It looks like u just removed a few lines and then put effects on the remaining lines.... using photoshop effects in a back design isnt really a good idea, but thats my opinion.

look at the raider deck, thats all it used.....

 

[LukeC1138]

it looks ... ok. i mean its not the best design ever but its not the worst

 

[magicdude44]

I like it, and I'm being perfectly honest.