i loved it cody heres my thoughts:
i loved everything you've got in that PDF . its an amazing document. your card material is a little out of my skill level. with the exception of Spread. but regardless i can still see the benefits of it. and the quality of the material.
the color changes are awesome. i liked the AC change more than the TC change though.
charred was fantastic. i love the idea of watermark with fire.
Spread is a great idea. the method kinda bugs me, I'm somewhat of a purist well, not a pure purist. but close enough that this trick bothers me. haha its still great. no worries. you've obviously polished this PDF till it shined.
great work! keep it up. i cant wait for more. maybe put out some tricks that your sleights work effectively with. i think you've got some very creative material.
-web