First Flourishing Video

[Bumblebee]

Don't be to tough on me...
I've only been flourishing for 5 months


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NteQR11L-mo

Oh and if you don't mind, sub me plz!!

 

[Bumblebee]

Common guys, i need some feedback!

 

[oooo191]

It was good Ricardo nice selection of flourish's would say add an effect like your own style i do mine with maximum contrast and in black and white so try an effect to make it good

 

[Mr.T]

good music, good moves, actualy everything is good... great done... maybe u could make some smal things better... like better lightning.... zoom a bit in .... or stand in front of a cool background like.. i dont'know ... a wall somewhere outside....but this is just deatails... video is good ^^

 

[TheShadowpt]

Sick Stuff man!
For just 5 months thats really good!!!

 

[AlexanderB]

That's very good, knowing that you've been only flourishing for 5 month. Keep it up, practice, and you'll do the best possible.