Please check out the attached link, paying attention to the first point of the
Society of American Magicians Code of Ethics. Magicians don't expose effects on Youtube, period.
Second, it is evident that you have learned how to do magic on Youtube. Your performance of the various sleights shows that you were taught those sleights incorrectly. It is also evident that you have not practiced enough. Your performances show that you have to take multiple attempts to preform certain sleights and you flash multiple times in a way that a lay spectator would see. Learn from someone who knows and respects the art of magic. You will not find that person exposing effects on YouTube. Think about it, would you rather learn from a thirteen year old or someone who has been doing magic for thirteen years?
Your patter is the stereotypical say-do-see patter. You say what you are going to do, you do it and then tell the audience to see what you've done. That adds nothing to the effect.
Finally, there is no magic in a disembodied set of hands and a deck of cards performing over a carpet. Go out and perform for real people (after you've practiced a lot more and developed better patter).
