I'm going to repeat some of the things the other guys said.
- Your DL is taking too long to setup. If that DL doesn't work out, try and use the 'strike' (waiting for sabor to yell at me).
- Pauses. You had multiple pauses before and after the 'moves.'
- Too fast! If you look at what's happening, there will be an awkward pause and some hand fumbling, then something will happen at a fast speed. Then again, slow when the move happens, and then really fast. If you want to go with that 'fast' theme, make sure you can setup and execute your moves at the same speed.
- Slow down the reveals. When you're about to flip over the card to show it has risen to the top, flip it slowly and build suspense.
- Be loose. Try and keep your hands and the deck loose. When you're stiff it looks like you're executing a move. Everything also looks better when you keep it loose. Oh, and so will the ACR.
- Bluff Pass. I'm not sure if you always flip over the ''cards'' when you execute the bluff pass; if you do, I suggest that you stop. Keep it face down let the spectator insert their card.
- The pop-up move. Like 'sick of you' said, if you tilt the deck slightly it looks like the card not only rises, but also jumps up.
I think that's all I got....
Mehar