l do not appreciate or recommend you troll or post snide comments back at other members of this community who are in earnest trying to help you. I believe that behavior got you a 7 day ban the last time we went through this.
You must learn to accept that this IS a community with diverse interests and personalities, and not every response will be a positive one singing your praises. Attention spans aside, he has a point. At the minute marker I haven't seen anything that establishes character, or purpose for me watching the film. You could stand to read a few books on story telling such as Saving the Cat. Avoiding this kind of disconnect will help you become more successful at retaining the audiences attention throughout your video. Remember, what kind of message are you trying to tell the audience?
As for the fire, it's not magical, in the sense that what we practice here on this forum is magic. It's not sleight of hand magic, it's movie magic... at best. If you can call it that. There is no suspension of belief. I know that fabric burns, and for all I care you've got fuel on the gloves that are burning in your palms. You have a couple fast cuts in there where it can only be assumed that the camera was stopped and more fuel was applied. The fire source is a lighter, it would have been better if the fire could have started by "itself". Then, you stop and end the video with out giving me any real sense of closure. I can't say that I liked this one.
I agree that it's a good thing that you're trying to find your artistic voice, and put yourself out there but remember this is magic... not some art house video. Magic demands a little more of a certain amount of attention and awareness when being filmed.