What do you think about my sandwichroutine?

[Philipp S.(4)]

Hey,

so im just messin around with a few ideas. tell me what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w3R8AQZ-WSY
Credits are in the description and my second control wasnt that smooth.
Cheers
Philipp

 

[6ofdiamonds]

My remarks:

The first and third phases were much smoother than the second phase. You seemed much more confident with those moves than you did with the moves for the second phase. Overall, good performance, just work on the moves for the second phase a little more.

 

[Arman Shah]

I liked it. I really liked how you presented the first effect.