Like others have said, the angle of the camera was absolutely horrible. Try putting it above, so you have a better idea of what's going on.
Second, use some spectators! And if you can't do that, at least throw in some patter! The performance was extremely dry and boring... there was nothing to entertain me... nothing to hold me in and make me want to keep watching.
For the most part, everything else was fine. Although I think the Bluff Pass was very porrly executed. Watch how Wayne performs it in the video, he acts as if he is really taking off half of the deck, and handles it so. You, it appears as if you aren't confident enough in your Bluff Pass, and it appeared as if you slapped the deck... at first I didn't know what going on.
If you're just naturally not good at doing the Bluff Pass slowly, use your imagination a little! When I first learned this effect, I didn't like the Bluff Pass, so I used my own way of controlling the card that better suited my needs and it utilized a skill I already had. Don't be afraid to change it up a little... make the effect your own!
And one thing that I almost forgot to mention was the selection of the card. It looked very awkward as you fumbled around with the deck while you extracted the card. Work on that!
The last thing I will critique you on is the reveal. It happened way, way too quickly. You need to pull the bag out form under the deck a tad bit slower, and really build up the suspense for your audience. And when you take it out, let it hang there for a minute, to let the audience wonder, "Could it possibly be my card?" Then, slowly open up the bag and remove the card. The way you performed it, it happened way too quickly, and you didn't give the audience to think about what was happening.
Also, and this is the 3rd time I've said this... in the past 5 hours... the effect is only giving you 10% of your reactions. The other 90% is your performance of said effect. The performance in this video was really lacking, and I got bored quickly. I know, you just wanted to critique you on your actual handling of the effect, but you need to make us want to critique you... make it entertaining for us!
So next time I see a video from you, I want to see some presentation, and a better camera angle to see it from!
