Response/Criticism on my Sybil please

[Shawty]

Aight so ive been practicing sybil for a couple of days now and i'd like some feedback, whether it's good or bad. Critisism, words of apreciation and tips are more than welcome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-E-S6B7BQCw

 

[Aris.SA]

you are too stiff.

 

[Shawty]

as in i need to work on my flow?

 

[Farrell]

you are too stiff.

Ha, thats what she said. But I agree it was a bit awkward looking, stick at it though.

 

[Eddie]

You also need a better camera.

 

[Bao Hoang]

Just don't bounce with that sybil and do it continuously.

 

[lachomagician]

Aight so ive been practicing sybil for a couple of days now and i'd like some feedback, whether it's good or bad. Critisism, words of apreciation and tips are more than welcome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-E-S6B7BQCw

Well, keep your arms loose, your hands look very stiff, if you relax them and if you relax their movement it will flow better. You have the moves down well enough, just work a bit on softening and smoothing your movements. If you've only been practicing for a couple of days, you are doing great my friend. Just keep practicing and you'll have it way nicer really soon.

Good job overall though

Juan

 

[Shawty]

Aight, thanks for the great response guys, hopefully ill have a new, smoother and improved sybil up on youtube in a couple of days

 

[Aris.SA]

as in i need to work on my flow?

sure you have too,

practice on your style

 

[dummyisdumb]

"A couple of days"

I lol'ed.

 

[Shawty]

What's so funny abt that?

 

[Shawty]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfpsdGcsagw


my second try, any better?

 

[dummyisdumb]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfpsdGcsagw


my second try, any better?

Try again in a few months.

 

[trashmanf]

dude you don't need to post a video of your sybil every couple of days to let us know how you're progressing. it doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure out if your cut needs to be faster or smoother. rather than join the ranks of 10000 youn00bs performing sybil badly , why not take a bit of time to practice and maybe in your next video show us something interesting.

 

[Shawty]

dude you don't need to post a video of your sybil every couple of days to let us know how you're progressing. it doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure out if your cut needs to be faster or smoother. rather than join the ranks of 10000 youn00bs performing sybil badly , why not take a bit of time to practice and maybe in your next video show us something interesting.

Aight, noted