Not bad, not bad at all. It was a bit (and I mean just a tiny bit) too long. Maybe you could take out one or two phases. (No more than that.)
It was hard to see what was going on a few times, but that's know fault of yours.
You obviously took a long time to come up with the patter for your effect which is not easy. I've never been fan of patter where inanimate objects have thoughts and feelings though. I just find it a bit cheesy. Each to his own I suppose. If spectators enjoy it, that's all that really matters.
Overall, good video, keep going!
My friend would really appreciate it if you could give him some criticism on his routine:
http://www.vimeo.com/6218970
There was another phase, but the camera battery died.