I like it! I created an effect identical to this 2 years ago. I would just make sure that you have all your ducks in a row. Don't have any awkward slowness in the change, try and make it look as effortless as humanly possible.
I think you need to work on refining 'transversal'. It has a vast amount of suspicious movement, and awkward groping of the deck. The flourish is good. Just get a good camera and videographer.