I really like the locations of your video! The angles were varied and the different backdrops were refreshing. However, the moves could be smoothened and developed further than what is shown in this video. If the moves were a little faster in pace and there was less time between readjustments then I think the moves would look better. Also, I do not think that you should show the same flourish for 1 and a half minutes straight, but instead twenty or thirty seconds maximum. Have fun!
Video quality is good, the moves are kinda meh. Good LePaul Spread, but your first and last moves (which I'm guessing are original or a variation of yours) seem underdeveloped. Add some extra cuts or displays to make the move more flashy.