The sleights are fine but the routine is way too long, I had difficulty watching the whole way through, music didn't help either, why not try actually presenting it? I don't think spectators will find it very enjoyable, it's far too self indulgent. Magic should be for spectators not for magicians.
I'd recommend cutting it down to 3 phases at most and carefully think about the purpose of each one. There's no real progression or structre, it's just the same thing again and again, spectators don't care that you're using a different method each time. It appears the same to them.