Good?

The immediate thought that ran through my mind is "I hate this music selection." I hate rap, and thus the music selection is an immediate turn off for me.

Your handling of the cards could use a lot of work. I'd say keep practicing. Your grip doesn't look natural.

You also have some difficulties with flashing. Why are you putting the cards down, and picking them up? I understand this is your creative variation, but I don't think this brings anything new to the table. The original handling for this effect is much smoother.

Overall I think you have some work to do. I'd rather see a performance clip than something just done to music, but if it must be music then please pick a track that complements your video.
 
Sep 1, 2007
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First, read this thread. Shoot something besides just your hands and pick music that actually fits the on-screen action.

Second, this is hardly anything new. I've seen at least half-a-dozen variations on the market and this one does not look markedly different enough to set my world on fire.
 

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My main problem was that even though most of the sleights were covered and I couldn't see exactly what you were doing, I could still see exactly when you were doing something. This is obviously what misdirection is for, but when you're performing to a camera with music, I'm watching every single move you make. I can't tell if this would work to an audience or not, because I haven't seen you perform it as it should be performed.
 
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