The variations on the werm were obvious, there were six packets rather than 5, I think people should stop being such elitist tools and be more helpful in thier critisim. He asked for critisim, not to be yelled at and abused. Cut the guy some slack, we all sucked at some stage, and getting input on how you are going is valuable to grow as a performer as well as a cardist.
I think for a beginner the video is a good start, the video effects were a bit rediculous and the video could be better without them but this is all learned through experimentation. Music not really my taste, videos generally go better when the cards and music kind of flow together. They don't need to be perfectly synced, but there should be more flow in the video rather than just move break move break move. Moves could use some work for smoothness, but you are a beginner so that isn't such an issue, smoothness and slow come with practice and don't come overnight. Keep it up and hopefully your next vdeo will garner nicer responses.
But I'm a beginner, so dont be too harsh.
