Okay, so here are a couple of notes.
*Smoothnes, before even attemptin to put the card in the middle like that, work your smoothnes, and by this I mean, see how you grab your deck, grab it gently, love it (haha weird but true) and respect it, learn how to cleanly spread the pack in your hands, but well, that will come in time.
*Your doubles are unnatural, pick a single card, just a single, would you use your whole hand to pick a "card" and show it? learn the good ol push off DL, it will take time but it will do you great, but in the meantime , learn another double that its not that obvious.
*Break's, one of the most important thing when handling cards, it's the way we get our breaks, think about it, people dont usually use two hands to grab the deck, why should you? getting a break with two hands its decent but you need to learn to do a pinky count(kinda hard), or simple push one, or two cards, get your break below and then square up, all under misdirection of you showing the selection, all the movement that I just described is using one hand.
*Passes, I dont know if in the middle you did like a pass, but I really didnt understanded the sleight you perform there, the case it's, you got the card to the top, but the change was kinda expected, I dont know how to describe it yet, but just practice.
Im very glad for you, you actually listened to what I told you and that makes me really glad, I'll maybe post a video later on doing your routine so you can see a little bit more about the things I just tolda ya.
I am in no way a pro, but I still think that you will find some things usefull, keep practicing, you are going in the right way.
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