New Design

[skeryliuk14]

Hey theory 11 forums. I am a thirteen year old graphic designer amed Sammuel Keryliuk. I have recently created a design that I hope to feature on t-shirts (which I have already made prototypes for) and a deck of cards. Please visit thye link below and view the image which is my design. I am hoping to post a project on Indiegogo to fundraise for the equipment possible for me to design more shirts. Please tell me your feedback on my design and my ideas. Thank you

http://500px.com/photo/8749364

 

[RickEverhart]

It is a decent design but needs a bit more to be a deck of cards in my opinion. Maybe some type of border around it?

 

[Toby]

Maybe it's just me, but it also needs to be easier on the eyes. I couldn't look at it for more than 5 seconds. Make it simpler and more defined. Just like Rick said, add borders and some texture too. It's a start though.