man i'm gonna be honest.. I dont know if you speed up some moves, or the camera has bad fps..
the camera had bad fps... The only one i had though.
i think that you are too stiff, you look like a robot, no offense, i mean relax your arms so the moves can look much smoother, i also think that you put the camera too close of the cards in some shots, and the cuts didnt look good, there are moves that look cool closer to the camera but the ones you did, not .. And i didnt understand that mindfreak look before the credits..
yeah, it wasn't a mindfreak look; it was something i saw in one of zachmonky's videos and i liked the pose, so i used it. Oh, and i am continuously getting more smooth at them. In another 3 months there will be another video you can watch.
and last but definitely not least, man there's a shot where you are doing the flourishes and there are some dirty socks there xd i mean these things doesnt make you look good, if you wanna make the vid in your room at least clean the sections where you are shooting..
yeah... I tried to cover that up. Didn't work to well. To tell you the truth, i didn't know they were there. My room is normally really clean... That was stupid of me.
p.s. I saw that you credit decknique so i think that you are there too, i posted a thread a while ago about what is the purpose of making your vid? I mean do you do it to get a 5/5 or what? Check that out, i think it'll help you.. And why naming the thread new flourishes, when you are saying that there are not xd
I didn't think the flourishing was THAT bad... As I said, I post these about every three months to get feedback on what I am doing right or wrong.
I want feedback, not "Your video sucks".
I can't get better if that is all you post.