Osprey

Sep 1, 2007
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San Francisco, CA
Hey guys, just uploaded a single move video of a move of mine called Osprey. I've been working on it for a while now, and just wanted some feedback.

As a note, the 2nd "part" of the move (with the display) is optional and was not part of the original flourish.

Remember to watch in HQ!

Osprey

Thanks,

David
 
Sep 1, 2007
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Venezuela
Nice, I like the flow, maybe if you can develop it more, it could become something much better, nice nice.. I didnt like the text effect, neither the font and that thing, just my opinion...
 
Nov 20, 2007
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Sydney, Australia
I'm not the biggest or the most knowledgeable around, but this was my impression: a clumsier Clueless-type flourish. The reason I say it's clumsy is partly because of the flow... More than the speed though, the front card actually just blocks everything that happens behind it for all but a half-second of the flourish, so I never really saw anything interesting, just a fat card back that turned once.

I do like these types of flourishes,but honest opinion and stuff, I don't mean to come across as harsh or rude though... Respect man, keep it up.
 
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