Pandemonium

Camel · Feb 2, 2009

Hey guys, I have been working on this cut (Pandemonium) for a while now and I would like to see what you guys think. The ending still needs to be tweaked a bit and I do need to make it smoother, but please tell me what you think of it.

Here it is: http://vimeo.com/3060050

The firs phase of the cut is based off of Pandora by Dan and Dave

jazzhands1 · Feb 2, 2009

ah, very nice. I like the corner spins a lot.

for the ending, I think instead of the armspread, you could do a display. Like a fan sybil or something.

louis · Feb 3, 2009

very nice
i love it
it's ok if i steal some ideas ? :]

FOO:L · Feb 3, 2009

against the grain here, but i didnt like it at all. sloppy, the armspread catch was a fail and the handling was very very messy. work on smoothness.

GusEds · Feb 3, 2009

Its an idea.

But I feel It has so many different - non conjoining parts, that It would be hard to make it smooth.

It's Daren Yeow, by the way

Gustav

Camel · Feb 3, 2009

I know that Daren Yeow made Mockingbird, which was another inspiration for the cut. And I also know that I need to make it smoother and make a better ending for it. This is still in the workings and I am still coming up with endings for it.

dragon521 · Feb 3, 2009

At about 24 seconds it went down hill. Up until then it was alright.

GusEds · Feb 4, 2009

Camel said:
I know that Daren Yeow made Mockingbird, which was another inspiration for the cut. And I also know that I need to make it smoother and make a better ending for it. This is still in the workings and I am still coming up with endings for it.

Nothing that practise cant resolve

What I meant was, you spelt 'Daren Yao' on the vimeo page, instead of Daren Yeow.

Gustav

Camel · Feb 4, 2009

Oh yeah, I noticed that and forgot to change it.

ROYm · Feb 8, 2009

well you know yourself you have to practice bit more and it will be perfect - im sure you know it yourself so its meaningless to say it again.
if i understand right you want us to tell you what we think of your cut in overall. well - i think its great. combining moves from mockingbird, molecule 4, and pandora and of course a touch of your own - its a creative combination that fits together . it looks great and it will look way better when perfecting it.

roy.