Your not improving anything your just showing us another video.
It feels like you're just begging for attention, not critique.
I reccomend you review the advise given to you in the two previous threads and learn from what people are trying to tell you. I don't like feeling like a broken records.
Go out and perform for people, not your webcam.
Interesting...i never seen this before you posted the link....one of my friends tell me about this to see and i see really nice...Thanks for sharing this....