It is very difficult to see your video.
Try and refilm it with better lighting, that will be a great help.
Since I do not own the effect, I can not give you a very insightful rating, however, some of your moves did look as though you were going through them very fast. Slow it down a little bit so that the spectator can see whats happening.
I'd give it a 5/10. It was OK, I would definitely slow it down, and use better lighting next time.
I hope that that helps!
TDA