Smoking Poster for Photography Contest

[shooting_rubber]

Hello,

I know this is a magic forum, but photography is also one of my other hobbies.

I was just wondering if anyone here could give me some advice on this smoking poster I recently created?

Let me know of anything I could change.

EDIT: The cigarette will also be changed to a more grayish colour to go with the rest of the poster.

Thanks.

 

[Zephil]

It's nice. I would try moving the hand slightly further to the right. Also, possibly try the text in red. It gives it more of a "WARNING" look.

 

[popchris3]

Man, thats awesome!

But I agree with the above. Either way, it is still great.

 

[chriswiehl]

thats nice. i like it
yea change the color of the text

 

[aJohnson]

The face seems kind of squished to me, but that may just be me.

 

[b+w]

Very nice! I do agree with some of the above comments on moving the hand to the right, but other than that it looks awesome!

 

[shooting_rubber]

Thanks everyone for your comments.

 

[Deleted member 2755]

Very nice. Despite its goodness, I will have to lock it. It's not fair if I lock some off topic threads and I don't lock others. With that being said, good job and this thread is now locked.

-Doug