Thoughts on my effect?

[domwhit23]

I have come with an effect that I am calling 'Attach'. I was going to upload it to The Wire as a free download but I would just like a little feedback on the promo video, and get peoples advice on whether it is good enough at the moment, or whether it needs a bit of work to make it better.
Thanks

Here is the link to the promo:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5hqHyxPTe1E

 

[junkbox]

Spending so much time messing around with your head turned is kind of suspicious, and if it has a big part in the effect, then the effect must be angle sensitive. If you can, spend less time turned away.