Any comments are welcome

[YM Madison]

hi, i'm from Hong Kong
I took some video about some tricks,some cardistry
It 's hard to improve cause i don't have many friends do magic
so,Any comments are welcome here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0fXrexsotvU
i will try to upload my invention later

 

[moooozzz]

Hi there,
Pretty nice I should say. I see you have practiced the moves quite a lot.
The two suggestion i could make on particular tricks:
In Episode 3 Tic-Tac trick your hand movement before and at the moment of execution of that "move" are very different, thus it doesn't look smooth.
In Episode 2 when performing the change (sorry forgot the name, some guys call it ninja change, but I am sure it has a different name) there is a huge hands motion which is absolutely unnecessary, you could just move your right hand slightly or simply close the palm.
I din't watch the 1st one, as I don't know anything about cardistry.