I'd only recommend to work on the "flare" timing, you seem to bring your right hand clipped packet out before it should be moved. Also, I have a feeling that the Sybilism phase should have more style adapted to it; it seems a few others agree ranging from the comments on the video. Perhaps try not to over-exaggerate/force the 'stutters' in the Sybil, and just let it naturally flow, like you've been doing it all your life.
Just a few personal points I thought needed to be made. Nevertheless, good try man.