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[Axe]

This is my own rising card,which I created prior to the release of Riot. Give me your thoughts.

∞Alex∞

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xc920On-0xI

 

[MitchellStafiej]

You are missing a link. : )

Mitch

 

[Axe]

Lol,my mistake ,its up now.

 

[InfinitiM13]

I gotta say, if that was impromptu, I would buy it in an instant. The idea is great. The little pushing of the top half of the deck is a tad suspicious, but the ending fixes that up.

 

[ayli]

Looks like you are using the gimmick from Panic.

Also, it is very easy to see that the card is only a few cards from the top when you place it in. But when you turn the deck face down the card seems on the bottom. A little fishy, no?

 

[MitchellStafiej]

There were a couple of things you could have improved on that would be even more convincing. I can't say much without possible exposure so hit me up on PM.

Mitch

 

[BlazeCinder]

thats nice..

 

[ReapingDevil]

thats nice..

correction. amazing =)

 

[clllllust]

The idea behind it was very good. For the presentation you could've, like others have said, add a few extra subtleties. Overall a good performance I'd give it a 4/5.

Cheers,
-RA69

 

[JDENredden]

Thats pretty good. I wish I thought of that first.

JDEN

 

[Axe]

Thanks for all of the constructive responses, I really do appreciate it. I see were I could have improved, so expect an updated version soon. Thanks again.

-Alex