Disclaimer: I am not an expert, simply an amateur magician who loves cards. My opinions are most definitely debatable, and I would love to be proven wrong so I can learn as well. My only qualification is that I have been toying with the same effect for quite some time.
That said...
I didn't like the video. Couldn't see anything. I actually had to force myself to watch the whole thing since I wanted to give some feedback that's actually useful and constructive.
The twisting aces plot is one of the most difficult card effects to present. The challenge lies in communicating the trick clearly and making the audience 'care' about the cards turning over. Your version fails here because too many flourishes convolute what should be a simple direct effect. The lighting and the editing don't help much either.
I advise you to learn some similar routines. Dai Vernon's original version is a classic because the handling is so clean. The Lee Asher version "Asher Twist" is also a classic because the reveals are done in a rapid fire machine gun way, and is beautiful to watch.
Remember to take note of the presentation as well. This effect is counted as mastered only when the presentation is mastered.
Thanks for your time.