My first video

[James196471]

Hi guys,
This is the first video I've made.

http://www.metacafe.com/watch/1051285/amazing_magic_tricks

I did box monster and indecent here and wanted to know what you guys think. Any suggestions would be helpful for my improvment. Thanks!

James

I couldn't put music on the video because of some stupid copyright thing, so I went with no music...

 

[darosa.justin]

A real perfromance would be nice...

But since it is your first video and not 'perfromance' then good job? You've shown that you can perform these effects smoothly...Now go out and capture a vid of a REAL performance!!

 

[dejavu05]

nice job...the last one was cool

 

[cbols23]

They were ok. But what really bugged me was your intro, "Amazing Magic Tricks"

It sounds like you are still a litle kid. I don't know though, maybe that is just me.

Anyway good job.

 

[mattjones]

....Music?

 

[MitchellStafiej]

Well, I have a few comments/suggestions about your video. First of all... why so silent! Patter would have made your video SO much better. I really disliked watching a silent video. You had sound on that camera why didn't you talk? It would have gotten me more interested.

The sleights were executed well, but I believe that you performed Box Monster a little too fast. Especially the reveal of the second card. Slow it down a bit, you've got time. Try to be more fluid with your motions as well!

Keep it up!

Mitchell