theory11 — Magic Tricks & the World's Finest Playing Cards

My New Trick

The effect itself was good, in my opinion. However, I think that you should refilm it during the daytime just so that everything can be seen better.

Overall, I thought it looked good.

TDA
 
I'm not sure of your method, so I can't comment. However I can point you to a trick where the effect is used very, very well. Worth looking at if you haven't already.

'Box Spring' by Greg Wilson. 4 Aces penetrate the box one after another visually. I think its on the Card Stunts DVD. Essentially its the same effect as yours, but routined into 4 phases, each one getting more and more impossible.

I suspect your method may be extremely similar to Greg's, since your handling looks the similar.
 
Try and make it fall, ina more visual way.

You cant call something visual when it seems like all you're doing is dropping a card.

Easy t figure out ayway..