Need Feedback On My Flourish

[gymaster97]

I made a flourish a while ago and i wanted some feedback
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G9TISko6MsY

 

[FatalAce]

Pretty good. Nothing that really blew me away though. Keep it up.

 

[Hat&Cane]

Hmmm.... nah.... doesn't 'flow' for me..... you make a nice fan though...
But keep it up. At least you're trying to be original and that's more than I can say for myself.. hahaha.

 

[darosa.justin]

I love the name 'Twister'. Really fits with all the twisting and turning of cards.

It looks nice to me...

But what the hell is with the "Coming Soon"?

You aren't honestly trying to make money from this..are you?

 

[gymaster97]

no there was tutorial for it but i took it down

 

[ElisG]

I don't like how you are advertising it as if it's a marketed product(even if its not). It was quite good, and congrats on coming up with it. Work on making it flow.

 

[BrianationX]

Keep Working on it
In five or eight years youll have something good
"Perfecting the material is nothing compared to creating the material"

 

[copperfield 14]

Keep Working on it
In five or eight years youll have something good
"Perfecting the material is nothing compared to creating the material"

Spam. You should have been banned by now. As for the cut. IT was good but the closer killed the flow of the cut.