Thanks for the ideas. I'll probably re-edit some of this footage, and other bits of the half hour of footage from that day, into another video later on. (Side note: I got the best non-reaction from card-to-mouth while I was filming.)
In editing this I wanted to show the entirety of the effects I performed. This presented problems, especially on the last trick which takes about 3 minutes on its own. The problem was, that trick got the best reactions, and I wanted some of those reactions in the video.
The music was originally much more prominent, making up about 90% of the sound track for what was going to be the final video. The only bits of audio from the original footage that were in my first "final cut" were me telling the guy "you're not supposed to fool the magician," the girl saying "that was scary," maybe a short clip from sponges explaining the hand and pocket thing, and the reaction at the end of the video. Then I showed it to my family and my dad pointed out some dead time and confusing bits near the end of the video. I compensated for this by turing on the video audio and lowering the music, effectively killing the feel that I had originally created. Looking back, I should have either ditched the music, or cut the dead time and confusing stuff.