Kudos for doing live performances! Keep it up.
A few pieces of advice. Watch the video again and watch it from a spectator's point of view. Does the camera angle capture what you want people to see? How about the various editing you used... does it highlight and add to what you want people to see, or distract and take away from the video?
In editing, sometimes (a lot of the time actually) less is more.
For the magic. Again... glad you are doing live performances, and you seem to have some pretty good confidence, which is a plus and will take you far.
For the routine... generally, if you have to try and get people to react more by using follow up questions like, "did you see that?" etc... then either the effect is hard to follow, you messed up, or the presentation is not there yet. I saw a few stages of your ACR where the reactions were probably not what you were hoping for, and you you tried to elicit a response with "you see that?" Well, maybe this is a stage of the ACR that needs work, a change, a lot more practice?
Using the pass for the actual "rise to the top" part, after you used it at the beginning to get one step ahead, is very risky, and even people with amazing passes will most likely not do this. Not even Fujii Akira does this more than once... and when he does... he uses the TCCP.
Again, good job and thanks for posting. Now, really watch and learn from your spectators' reactions, and let the negative and not so great reactions hint you towards areas that could use some working on.