Flight to Witch Mountain - Alex Elmsley
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Nice, I like that they gather slowly. The presentation needs more energy. The begining seemed to drag just a bit, the more it drags the less direct it becomes. I find myself doubting the queens are in the origional spots because of the time that elapsed from when we saw the faces and you buried the queens. I think if you tighten up the presentation up till you bury the queens it will be stronger. I feel like the pacing was nice for the reveal though 
Cheers for the feedback, I know what you mean about the start of it, it does feel a bit drawn out but I think the way Elmsley gives the spectator a (supposedly) free choice of which queen is the leader and the flash of the queen while explaining they're going to join the leader are really nice touches that make the effect stronger. Will have to work on getting it laid out quicker without it feeling rushed.
Yeah I totally agree, that was something I wasn't expecting. It looks like an interesting routine