I agree the DL's stop the rhythm you are creating and visually it stops the performance. I also would be carefully with your Marlow tilt, because it definitely looked obvious what you were doing when you get ready for the DL I have a simple way to cover that that I use if you want to pm me. The sandwich between the two jacks was a little hard to understand what had happened at least that show I feel it may come across for a spectator. Lastly and this is just going to be my opinion, your sleights a good and you do not need to do 8 or 9 phases for the ambitious routine the way you present it. My ambitious routine is three phases with a surprise fourth phase. All in all though you are doing some great work and I love that you are taking time to work things out it shows. Nice work