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notsoltd

notsoltd

Sep 2, 2007
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We just had a project in digital graphics class and I decided to do my project using just the guardians (aside from a quarter and a rubber band I had to throw in to meet the grade requirements)

Anyways, here is the pic, tell me what you think!
 

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R.K. magician78 said:
We just had a project in digital graphics class and I decided to do my project using just the guardians (aside from a quarter and a rubber band I had to throw in to meet the grade requirements)

Anyways, here is the pic, tell me what you think!
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Im a graphics man myself. Been at it for about 3.5 years.
Work on your color scheme, depth, and composition.
Its way too busy for my taste.
I would try to put focus on something rather than have everything look the same
 
what u got to think about it the point of ur picture. what message u are putting across. what do u want ur audience to think and feel when they see this.
im hoping to go uni to do graphics
 
It was the best I could do. Our teacher didnt really teach it well, and I had to put alot of stuff in there to pass. Anyways, It was fun to make.
 
I'm going to be real critical here (I'm a bit of a graphic guy too, 4 years of photoshop experience)...

- There's no focal point. In a good picture, you need the eye to go somewhere. This doesn't have that.

- Colours are all over the place, there's not really a colour scheme, more randomly chosen colours everywhere.

- It's not particularly smooth, harsh colours and choppy images - it'd be better if they flowed.

- Lighting is a bit off - it's coming from the top where the joker is, and if you do want an effective focal point, that certainly isn't it.

Just a bit of constructive criticism, didn't mean to sound harsh or anything.

-Sam H
 
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