theory11 — Magic Tricks & the World's Finest Playing Cards
Needs some work.
1. The force needs to be better, it seemed forced (which it shouldn't) when you stopped cutting and he didn't say stop.
2. If the spectators are not looking at you, make sure the change is very well covered, just in case they are looking at the deck.
3. Patter needs work, make sure you know what you are saying and don't stumble or repeat yourself too much.
4. Having the random card in the middle suddenly be the six doesn't really make sense. Try and redo the plot line a bit to be more cohesive.
It's a clever idea, just needs some work.
Jacob