theory11 — Magic Tricks & the World's Finest Playing Cards

My first and best drawing of a flourisher

Look at this. It might look like Dan or Dave.

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tell me what you think about it.
 
Great job!

Unfortunately my OCD makes it nearly impossible to draw, but I always enjoy viewing others artwork. His left hand looks a little large, but other than that, everyone looks great!

Again, good job!
 
Your first and best.

Sorry to throw this out there, it's also your worst :p

It looks awesome! Nice job on the cards, they looks so sweet!
You could draw a fan. that would probably look really sweet too.
 
not bad, work on the body a little... how long did you spend on it because maybe next time you could shade sections in and work on it a bit longer but its not bad...
 
Niiiiice!
i like drawing too, but never expected drawing a flourish.
DO MORE!!!
btw try different perspectives...might be quite interesting! =)
Keep up ur good work m8
 
Pretty good for your first.

I might seem a little harsh, but I am helping you. I know, I'm an artist (I've been drawing a long time, and I still need improvement)

Some parts are a little out of proportion; the size of the shoulder relative to the head. The body is rather short. The legs, hands and arms are rather large.

May I ask, are you unable to draw hands properly or are not pleased with them? That may be why the hands are too large. Sometimes people will draw hands and feet either too small, too large or they may hide so they wouldn't have to draw them (e.g hands in pockets). This is because they are unable to draw the parts in question correctly or what have you.

Overall, very neat sketch; alot better then most 'firsts' I've seen. It's nice. If you like drawing, I advise you to continue, you WILL improve. And keep ALL of your drawings, it is really helpful.

~ .:Jess:.
 
Nice. I draw too, and some porportions were too large or small, but it was good.

The next time you draw one, try to shade in light, make it more realistic, even if it's just a few blocks of greay at first.