My performance of three fly by eric jones.

[cleanentertainer]

what do you think?
[video=youtube;IRWwVNWJ__w]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRWwVNWJ__w[/video]

 

[Josh Burch]

Your look like a funny guy It still needs some work though. I'd work on your scripting, it's difficult to understand what your saying at certain points.

 

[Jebzy]

very cool, I love your jokes

 

[cleanentertainer]

thanks guys!

 

[cleanentertainer]

if you liked it or have constructive criticism please also leave it in the comment section on youtube. also please if you did. like my vid. thanks!

 

[cleanentertainer]

Your look like a funny guy It still needs some work though. I'd work on your scripting, it's difficult to understand what your saying at certain points.

thanks for the advice, i realize i do need to work on my scripting for certain tricks like these.

 

[RickEverhart]

Please work on your enunciation. You are mumbling and difficult to understand. If you are doing this for spectators they will not comprehend anything you are saying. Keep working on the routine to get it down a bit more smoothly as well.

 

[cleanentertainer]

I appreciate the pointers. I will work on it a bit more.