Need help making a better trailer for this.

[phantom1412]

[video]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3lD5I64tGQo&feature=youtu.be[/video]

Need idea to make a better trailer for this.
Any comments or ideas would be appreciated.
What do you want to know more about the roses if you are gonna buy this?

 

[ArmanMagic]

From the beginning, I didn't understand it was a tutorial to make a rose until like in the middle of the trailer. Also I think if could show applications of what you could do instead of pictures that'd be great. It's seems like a cool idea.