theory11 — Magic Tricks & the World's Finest Playing Cards

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It isn't bad at all. Good handling and vanish of the indifferent card. Your DL swivel looks nice and smooth. I use it all the time. I'm a bit confused on the aces though. I know where they come from but why? Is it just to add another little surprise for the spectator?
 
You're moves are very smooth and well practiced. However I agree with Rick. Without any patter backing this up the aces at the end are disjointed and doesn't make any sense. Perhaps you could do a production of the two aces, and then vanish them first. That way they reappear at the end with the other card. That could actually make for a fairly cool little routine.

I'm not a fan of the music selection. It doesn't work for the magic. Honestly I think it's a crutch for not having patter, which is something I personally detest. You can do the coolest moves, but if you aren't entertaining who is going to care?
 
That's what I was thinking Draven. If he keeps the Aces...they need to be produced at the beginning...then vanished so the reappearance of them brings everything full circle.