Recess - A new Flourishing Video

[The Maestro]

My third video and first one this year. There's still a lot of improvement to be made so I'd like some criticism.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bjyuds187Vs

Thanks.

 

[Mr.T]

looks great good job

 

[AlexanderB]

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