Street Magic

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Donald C.

Nov 10, 2007
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I just got done editing my website it has taken a few days now but my website is looking pretty cool anyways on my website I have a street magic series in the videos section. You can go check that out if you want.
Dscmagic.com
Thank you I hope this is not against the rules I am not trying to advertise my site I just here alot of people asking about street magic. I have 4 videos of street magic go check that out!
 
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Squ!rrel

Apr 28, 2008
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It looked like you were doing a good job with the magic but I didn't like the way it was filmed at all. It was too zoomed in and I don't like just being able to see your hands most of the time. Also, why have you got some weird Sepia effect on the videos. Everyone seems to have to do some weird editing, either Black and White, Sepia etc. Why not just use colour?

I like the magic, not the editing.
 
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tokyoUW

Sep 26, 2007
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Tokyo, Japan
I like that you are wanting to publicize, so don't take my following comments the wrong way. I believe they are important for making your site better.

First and foremost: Get someone to read over your content and have them edit your English. You have a lot of grammatical errors, to the point where it is distracting. If you are trying to publicize your magic in a professional and possitive manner, grammatical errors and spelling mistakes cast a very negative shadow over the site.

Second: I would get rid of the unnecessary features on the site, like the "number of users online," "counter," and "copy and past HTML box." Too much clutter makes the site look cramped and unorganized. Simple is best. Content needs to have a valid purpose. If you are looking for a site with every single feature possitive, you should use MySpace (haha, I hate My Space, which is why I mentioned).

Keep working on it bud! Looking promising so far.
 
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