Unity (Jackson 5 Variation) Help

[yyyyyyy]

I've been flourishing for around 5-6 years now and when I learned the original Jackson 5, it quickly became a personal favorite out of all my other moves. However, I never liked how Jackson 5 was more of a Sybil based cut. Sybilism and The Five Faces of Sybil are the main part of the cut and it always felt unstable to me. Madonna always felt alot more stable and made it much easier to start the cut quickly. So, I began piecing together a new cut that was more Madonna/Werm based then the original Jackson 5. My current cut, Unity, now has the following cuts in this order:
Madonna by Dan and Dave
Collective by Michael James
Sybil in the Rain by Daniel Madison
Turbulence by Jordan Lapping
My 11 packet Werm variation
Hot Stones by Bone Ho
My question to you all is do you see any problems with my current cut? How would you do it if this was your cut? Thanks in advance for your help.

 

[cardistry26370]

its sounsd hard but nice end product video?

 

[yyyyyyy]

If I can. Like you said, it is a pretty hard cut. I'l upload the final display if you'd like though, because that's the only original creation I included and it works by itself.

 

[cardistry26370]

yh cool i have seen the others just wanna see the transitions

 

[yyyyyyy]

The first transition is fairly self explanatory due to the fact that Madonna and Collective both happen in the same grip. It only takes a scissor cut and a slight grip modification to jump from one to the other. the transition from Collective to Sybil in the Rain is a bit trickier though, because one is in Sybil grip and the other is in that weird triangle based/Madonna grip. However, during the flair portion of Collective, you are momentarily put into Sybil grip. So I just jump to the next cut from there. Sybil in the Rain can obviously transition to Turbulence fairly quickly because the Skater cut is also already in Sybil grip. Once Turbulence is finished, you are left with only 2 packs and you can easily go into my Werm variation. Speaking of which, I have just completed the video talking about that display. You have to watch the full video though, because the official final display is near the end and the ones i show in the beginning were just concepts. Here's the link to the display, let me know what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jpOriz-fCg0