@d00m5day
let me start then...(i really hope my critics and tips can make your sleights better)
things that I like :
1. safe sleights that make your handling can be done surrounded by people
2. the off beat of the Magician seems can't find the card, and Bam... (you get the point)
3. your spreads and fans are even tho... they look great
4. i love the deck, coz i love white. ghost is my 1st deck that i fall in love with
things that I don't like
technique:
1. you are trying to make a plot that looks you miss the card, try to convince it with a simple sleight, and maybe a sloppy one. i don't really like the sybils thing, it's always too much for me to add them into a card trick routine. try a simple control like double under cuts, or maybe a pass will do best. remember, when spectators know that you are great with cards, they'll pay attention to your hands more.
2. I see that you're having a bit diffulty doing riffle shuffle in the air, coz there's too much squaring actions. try hindu shuffle, and to retain the bottom card or package you can do what they call "milking" (you did that on your very 1st hindu shuffle tho)
3. the break was big, work on that more
4. putting the king down, and lift it up again...
5. can you do how to close a fan one handed?it's neat tho, try it
others:
1. your camera angel was a bit not fair. coz no one will see from that side of view (unless you're playing tricks with kids). try to lever it up a bit. and if you do so, you'll get lot's advantages, such as more sleights that are invisible like plaming, crist twist or half pass(like i did), and invisible breaks ofcourse.
2. when revealing the reverse card, try spreading the cards slowly, it builts the efect.
3. is it speeded up?
I hope my critics won't insult you, coz I do very very very love magic, and it's sad to see a good efect turns bad because lot's of people didn't pay attention to the details. I'm still learning my self, the hard way if you may say so, coz mostly I learnt them from my own mistakes. so I do hope by sharing things here can make us both a better magicians.
PS : sorry for bad grammars, I don't speak English too well (n_n)