Nice thinking, nice simple effect. However, you were flashing quite a bit, and as a result the method was somewhat exposed to me.
It's always important to check your video for flashes and how it actually looks. In your video you were hesitant with your sleights, some flashed and you
looked like you were doing moves... People should see what the machine
does not what the machine
looks like, y'know?
So yeah... all in all, good effect, good thinking, not as good a video. A tip I like to use is that, your own video should be good enough to entertain/fool/impress even yourself.
- Sean