contructive feedback on a video

[beeonabike]

it would be nice if you could watch my video that i edited and give me some constructive feedback http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lalObTIa5wQ

i will be making longer videos with different content so try not to metion that

thanks

 

[WitchDocIsIn]

This seems like an interesting intro to a video, but not a complete video in itself.

 

[beeonabike]

This seems like an interesting intro to a video, but not a complete video in itself.

yeh i know what you mean,the video was just made to try out editing

 

[Steerpike]

You're observing the thirds rule (mostly) which is good. Cut out the one special effects shot. It's not needed, especially since you used the jump cut to edit yourself out of the picture anyway.

 

[Josh Burch]

It looks pretty cool to me. It's tough to get the complete picture because it's so short but I like it. I'm not sure what flowers have to do with Aviators but they're cool. AlsoI agree with the whole jump cut thing that Steerpike said.